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  • @weebmetalorange
    finished reading your story long ago, i went to take another look at it just to verify this review but it was removed, first of all congratz on being published, it means you are on the right track, But don’t you dare slack off or think that you have reached your goals, you just started, and from now on it gets tougher and tougher!…[Read more]

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    • There is a manga drawing tournament in the first chapter πŸ™‚ Unfortunately, can’t send the draft according to the contract. Sorry πŸ™

  • S0rahana posted an update 1 day, 21 hours ago

    @byakugan-amr I’m about done with Requiem. Overall, the level of story was too far compared to the previous volume, the grammar also improved a lot. Once done, I’ll post my final review πŸ˜€

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    • @sora-hana
      Just finished the prologue and the first chapter, i have some small pointers to say, first off all, it was a new concept and a refreshing read, yet there is something that bothered me from the start. i actually had no clue what the hell was going on once the prologue and half of the first volume were read, this doesn’t mean it is bad,…[Read more]

      • Thanks for the honest review. But I think I’ll argue with what you’ve said about “luck” because I personally believe that in games or in anything… luck is normally involved. Whether you are the most hardworking or smartest person in the world, without luck, and a good coincidence, I believe it’s meaningless.

        Nevertheless, I agree with the…[Read more]

  • Strovist posted an update 2 days, 13 hours ago

    @byakugan-amr Hi Byako, can I ask you for a favour? Could you read the third chapter of my second volume to see if I did not go overboard. The chapter is about magical weapons where I get to introduce the various classes and where the Main Character gets to choose his weapon. It’s still in beta form so do expect some grammatical errors.

    • Requiem of souls Volume 3 is up, i just finished my exams so i will be doing some reviews of the stories here on Vicslab. Have a nice day everyone.

  • S0rahana posted an update 3 weeks ago

    @byakugan-amr I’ve been reading v2. So far it’s getting interesting. I’ll write a review soon πŸ˜€

  • Strovist posted an update 1 month ago

    @byakugan-amr Oh good news. My review got through. It’s officially on amazon.uk. Yay!

    https://www.amazon.co.uk/gp/product/B06XDG83KW/ref=oh_aui_d_detailpage_o00_?ie=UTF8&psc=1


    • Thank you very much strovist. Not only are you a great friend and supporter you are also encouraging me by this. I can’t thank you enough.

  • Strovist posted an update 1 month ago

    @byakugan-amr Hi Byako, how are you? I got your book on UK kindle Amazon. It’s really looking great, and I left a customer review. Hopefully amazon will pass my review and help you get more readers. Cheers!

  • S0rahana posted an update 1 month ago

    @byakugan-amr Volume 1 final review is now posted πŸ˜€

  • Mohamed Shafiek posted an update 1 month ago

    It seems like @byakugan-amr or @sora-hana (which I don’t think is the one who did) decided that my reply to one of the Requiem reviews was worthy of deletion. In that case, I’ll post it here for the public viewing. My voice will be heard for I am the grim reviewer of Vic’s Lab stories:

    That’s a really review Sorahana. I also thought that the…[Read more]

    • Thank you for the honest review and believe me i deleted nothing one more thing it is indeed hard to keep up with grammar but i am doing my best. If people do not want to read the next volume then its alright no one is forcing them as for why i said that things will get better that was for one person as many others found the story to be more than…[Read more]

      • This is not a review, it was a response to Sorahana review in which I agreed and added some of my personal thoughts. In my actual reviews, I give heaps on constructive criticism.

  • S0rahana posted an update 1 month, 2 weeks ago

    @byakugan-amr Started reading Requiem, how about we exchange reviews?

  • Strovist posted an update 2 months ago

    @byakugan-amr Hi, Byakugan, here’s my long awaited constructive feedback for Everlasting volume 4

    Before I start, just want to give a heads up again. I have a lot to say in regards to this volume, and this review is biased to my own personal views. If you feel that what I say is unjustified, please don’t take it personally.

    First off, a lot o…[Read more]

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    • Every single one of your questions will be answered in the following volumes, the source of yuna’s change of heart. the origin of Asura the secret behind the world, i know it is a huge info dump but after reading the next part you will understand. one last thing the dark aspect of the story was prepland a long time ago. it should be the most…[Read more]

      • Ah, I see. Well that explains a lot:) I’ll read the next volume and let you know what I think, but good job on this volume. A lot of good stuff and story development. Keep up the good work:)

  • Strovist posted an update 2 months ago

    @byakugan-amr Congrats on the review from Reid Byakugan:) I hope you get more readers soon:)

  • Mohamed Shafiek posted an update 2 months ago

    @byakugan-amr Congratulations Biako for the release of volume 1! I hope its everything you ever wanted out of it. I’m not far behind you though. I consider you my biggest rival.

  • Finally finished the cover! It may not be as good as @byakugan-amr Everlasting volume 1 cover, but I love how this came out…. actually I might make this a poster for myself. Front Cover

    Finally finished the cover! It may not be as good as @byakugan-amr Everlasting volume 1 cover, but I
  • Byakugan Amr posted an update in the group Group logo of The Everlasting.The Everlasting. 2 months, 3 weeks ago

    1000 member a new milestone. Thank you all for reading this is a great achievement!!!

  • Strovist posted an update 3 months, 1 week ago

    @byakugan-amr Hi Byakugan,

    How are things? Man I see that you are pretty active online for the past few weeks. Wish I were as free as you… but anyways, I managed to catch a break and I thought of giving your volume 3 a shot. Surprisingly it was shorter than what I expected, but in a way it’s good for me since I don’t really get much free time…[Read more]

    • Loving the details and work you make every time you read and give a review on my story thank you man a lot. once last thing i might disappoint you in the fourth arc as it will probably not be the way you expect, one of my friends actually began calling me a sadist after it was over…the thing is the handling of four schools is almost impossible…[Read more]

  • @byakugan-amr Not sure if you know about this, I found your Patreon but there’s an option to give rewards when people donate to a certain tier or so. Since you mentioned writing characters for people if they donate or something, I figure you should add that so that people have more of an incentive to donate if they look at your Patreon

  • What are your thoughts on the story and the progression so far guys. i hope you can all give me some feedback so that i could see where i need to improve and what to keep. remember this is a light novel series and is based on Japanese culture so anything that you find could help please share with me

  • Byakugan Amr posted an update in the group Group logo of The Everlasting.The Everlasting. 4 months ago

    Thank you all for joining never had i thought that we will get 600 members. i hope that you all enjoy the story. one more thing someone back at royal road is giving me half stars…it kinda ruins my flow and really bothers me. i hope that once you guys finish reading here that you would give a proper constructive review back at Royals or here. it…[Read more]

  • Byakugan Amr posted an update in the group Group logo of The Everlasting.The Everlasting. 4 months ago

    Thank you all for joining i hope you find it pleasant here at vicslab

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