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  • Strovist posted an update 3 days, 6 hours ago

    @byakugan-amr Hi, Byakugan, here’s my long awaited constructive feedback for Everlasting volume 4

    Before I start, just want to give a heads up again. I have a lot to say in regards to this volume, and this review is biased to my own personal views. If you feel that what I say is unjustified, please don’t take it personally.

    First off, a lot o…[Read more]

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    • Every single one of your questions will be answered in the following volumes, the source of yuna’s change of heart. the origin of Asura the secret behind the world, i know it is a huge info dump but after reading the next part you will understand. one last thing the dark aspect of the story was prepland a long time ago. it should be the most…[Read more]

      • Ah, I see. Well that explains a lot:) I’ll read the next volume and let you know what I think, but good job on this volume. A lot of good stuff and story development. Keep up the good work:)

  • Strovist posted an update 3 days, 11 hours ago

    @byakugan-amr Congrats on the review from Reid Byakugan:) I hope you get more readers soon:)

  • Mohamed Shafiek posted an update 1 week ago

    @byakugan-amr Congratulations Biako for the release of volume 1! I hope its everything you ever wanted out of it. I’m not far behind you though. I consider you my biggest rival.

  • Finally finished the cover! It may not be as good as @byakugan-amr Everlasting volume 1 cover, but I love how this came out…. actually I might make this a poster for myself. Front Cover

    Finally finished the cover! It may not be as good as @byakugan-amr Everlasting volume 1 cover, but I
  • Byakugan Amr posted an update in the group Group logo of The Everlasting.The Everlasting. 3 weeks, 3 days ago

    1000 member a new milestone. Thank you all for reading this is a great achievement!!!

  • Strovist posted an update 1 month, 2 weeks ago

    @byakugan-amr Hi Byakugan,

    How are things? Man I see that you are pretty active online for the past few weeks. Wish I were as free as you… but anyways, I managed to catch a break and I thought of giving your volume 3 a shot. Surprisingly it was shorter than what I expected, but in a way it’s good for me since I don’t really get much free time…[Read more]

    • Loving the details and work you make every time you read and give a review on my story thank you man a lot. once last thing i might disappoint you in the fourth arc as it will probably not be the way you expect, one of my friends actually began calling me a sadist after it was over…the thing is the handling of four schools is almost impossible…[Read more]

  • MarisaHanamura . posted an update 2 months ago

    @byakugan-amr Not sure if you know about this, I found your Patreon but there’s an option to give rewards when people donate to a certain tier or so. Since you mentioned writing characters for people if they donate or something, I figure you should add that so that people have more of an incentive to donate if they look at your Patreon

  • Byakugan Amr started the topic The Evelasting in the forum Group logo of The Everlasting.The Everlasting. 2 months ago

    What are your thoughts on the story and the progression so far guys. i hope you can all give me some feedback so that i could see where i need to improve and what to keep. remember this is a light novel series and is based on Japanese culture so anything that you find could help please share with me

  • Byakugan Amr posted an update in the group Group logo of The Everlasting.The Everlasting. 2 months ago

    Thank you all for joining never had i thought that we will get 600 members. i hope that you all enjoy the story. one more thing someone back at royal road is giving me half stars…it kinda ruins my flow and really bothers me. i hope that once you guys finish reading here that you would give a proper constructive review back at Royals or here. it…[Read more]

  • Byakugan Amr posted an update in the group Group logo of The Everlasting.The Everlasting. 2 months, 1 week ago

    Thank you all for joining i hope you find it pleasant here at vicslab

  • Byakugan Amr posted an update in the group Group logo of The Everlasting.The Everlasting. 2 months, 1 week ago

    a message to the entire group. guys listen if you come from royal road and you yourselves are a writer i would urge you to consider putting your story here on @vic lab. if the admins think it within the category of their work you may get a chance to publish your own book here. give it a try and go to the story group to post anything you have…[Read more]

  • Byakugan Amr posted an update in the group Group logo of The Everlasting.The Everlasting. 2 months, 2 weeks ago

    hey Everyone! Volume 6 of the everlasting is now posted here. Enjoy the read. by the way if i could ask (again) that you rate my story back on RRL i would be happiest. i am ranked 288 and would like the boost that you could offer. thank you all and once again enjoy the read.

  • Byakugan Amr posted an update in the group Group logo of The Everlasting.The Everlasting. 2 months, 2 weeks ago

    Thank you all for joining the group it is growing fast ^^ i hope that you enjoy the story. and for those that had already finished the read of the story the Everlasting i should probably mention again that i only post Volume per volume here. back at royalroad i already posted few chapters of the sixth volume of the Everlasting . more so if you…[Read more]

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    • Thanks for the mention! I noticed your story has gotten more than 16,000 views already on Royal Road. You’re doing great!

      • Thank you very much! ^^

        • I noticed you are at more than 30,000 views on Royal Road already! And your story isn’t officially released yet! That’s amazing! I have about 35,000 views for my first Vecto book on Wattpad, which took me more than a year to get. I like that Royal Road lets fans rate the story. Maybe I should try it. Hmm. The main downfall is I haven’t been able…[Read more]

          • give it a shot back at royal road and i will make sure to put a mention to your story. I hope you could sort out the legal problems with it and be able to post it there i think you will get enormous amounts of feedback. thank you for following 🙂

  • Byakugan Amr posted an update in the group Group logo of The Everlasting.The Everlasting. 2 months, 2 weeks ago

    200 Members!! fantastic I hope that you all enjoy this makes me truly happy!

  • @byakugan-amr Hi, I think that if you want more people to comment on your novel on a different site, you should try out Honeyfeed. It’s a recently made site for hosting light novels, and there’s quite the fanbase on there already. It looks like most people on there comment on the novels too, so I think you should try that.

    Anyways, I’ve read a…[Read more]

    • Thank you very much for the advice, I am Honestly very bad at punctuation as you have noticed. i am trying. about the other websites i will look into it after i contact Vic. i don’t want to post anything without his consent first so thank you.

  • Byakugan Amr posted an update in the group Group logo of The Everlasting.The Everlasting. 2 months, 2 weeks ago

    A shootout to my friend strovist please read his story Tripl orb academy it is gigantic and very fun to read. by the way could you guys please rate/favorit on the story The Everlasting next time? if i have your votes i might make it to top 100 thank you.

  • Byakugan Amr posted an update in the group Group logo of StoriesStories 2 months, 3 weeks ago

    Fifth volume of the story The Everlasting is now live on vicslab. you are welcome to join the group to discuss anything you want to know thanks to everyone that read my story and provided feedback especially Strovist and Reid they were great help

  • Byakugan Amr posted an update in the group Group logo of The Everlasting.The Everlasting. 2 months, 3 weeks ago

    Common please guys some interaction… don’t be the type to just read and go i would really love a few comments here or back at royal don’t be the type to say he have other readers they can comment for him, no, please do comment yourself i want your opinion don’t think of your ideas or thoughts as bothersome or lowly hell i will answer every…[Read more]

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