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  • For those who liked the first chapter of Overloaded, I will most likely have the second chapter ready for review in the coming couple days. I just need some time to format it for you all since people here read more in paragraphs than stage directions, yeah?

  • Ice Fairy posted an update 1 week, 1 day ago

    @sora-hana @weebmetalorange, hi I’ve been working on the cover of God;art. It takes me 3 days to make this. And please suggest me how to color it and create background.

    I thought it’ll be easy to draw, Anime and manga. Never knew it was so hard…[Read more]

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    • Check it on my wall

    • Nice!

    • Um… I’m sorry, but it just doesn’t look good… Maybe have someone else draw it for you and you just give them the rough outline of what you want to show in the cover. I could do it if you want, but it’ll cost. Making a cover is a lot of hard work that needs direction, interesting visuals, and a message that screams the unique catch of the…[Read more]

      • Haha I think so, this is my first time drawing (if doodles doesn’t count). I was about to ask you but It’s like a bet. I’ll have to beat my drawing partner on paper. 😅😅 She said she doesn’t like Anime drawing 😫😬😬😠😭😭. Her artwork was selected for drawing exhibition so she is busy making her art.…

        • I mean, I think the best thing to do is to improve your basic skills before you put it into a big project like a book illustration. Don’t just jump in and draw. Learning and understanding the basics of drawing while also developing your own style is more important as an artist than bets tbh.

  • Update: Square One Volume 2 is half way done being edited! I honestly took a break from the series but just know that it is still being worked on.

  • Hey @thaddeus, since you don’t have a profile picture for Vic’s lab, why don’t I make one for you? I can make it the main character of triple orb academy or someone else. If you do want me to make one, what specifications do you want, like hairstyle, skin tone, clothing?

  • S0rahana posted an update 1 week, 6 days ago

    @weebmetalorange I’ve been drawing for a while and I still know know what commissions mean. Can you elaborate what it is 😀 Thanks!

  • S0rahana posted an update 2 weeks ago

    @weebmetalorange Also, since the manga that you are drawing is shonen, participate to this competition if you are interested 😀

    https://medibang.com/contest/jumpuniversal/

    Good luck!


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    • Damn… I can’t join… While it would be really nice. My manga ends up being 58 pages, breaking the 55 page limit… I wish I could shorten it somehow but I really need everything there…

  • S0rahana posted an update 2 weeks ago

    @weebmetalorange Done reading, and here are the issues that I’ve found. (Only a few)

    1st: The length. I’m not sure but the script needs a lot of trimming for it to be considered as 1 manga chapter. If you converted that same script, I think it’ll take a lot of pages. That’s also the problem that I take when I do manga. It’s not that I made a good…[Read more]

    • First, The first chapter script is made in mind of being 60 pages, which is what it came out to in my storyboards. The other chapters will be 30-40 pages each. It’s not going to be formatted to the 20 page limit of Shonen Jump. So, the scripts have to be longer than what you would see in a 20 page chapter. Studying manga and manga format has…[Read more]

  • S0rahana posted an update 2 weeks, 1 day ago

    @weebmetalorange I’ve received it 😀

  • Ice Fairy posted an update 2 weeks, 2 days ago

    @weebmetalorange Overloaded, chapter 1 really got me 😄. It was easy to understand the story. And one thing I like the most is that your way of story telling is awesome. It feels like I was inside the scene. So there must be other rare power user in the story. I’m amazed that you put so much work into this story 😯. You must-have re-edit it several…[Read more]

    • You’ll learn more the nanobots as the story continues. They’re more than people believe they are :). Glad you liked the story ^_^

  • Strovist posted an update 2 weeks, 2 days ago

    @weebmetalorange it seems strange when I look back to my older chapters and realise some parts have to be changed in order to provide a clearer presentation. I guess a writer’s writing does mature the more you expand into the story.

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    • That’s good to recognize how far you come as a writer. With it, you understand your ability to improve and can use that to effectively further your writing. Even though I’m just a member like you all, it really warms my heart to see people on this site improve story by story or story by revise. It really feels like everybody here is in an…[Read more]

  • Not yet. I’ll check them out when I can.

  • I don’t like the “Dark Lord” trope, but damn do I feel sorry for the “dark lord.” Like seriously, Imagine walking into like an office space and just every co-worker looks at you like, “Yeah, he’s dead. Main character gonna get him.” Like, I wouldn’t be surprised if the man is evil because all he gets is negative looks and comments. Poor guy… If…[Read more]

  • Alright. So I took a random piece of dialogue here to explain what I mean by lacking tact. “I’m sorry, Emily. You fought so hard to win and achieve your dream, but it looks like we’ve both failed, right?” So my first gripe would be the verbal use of the sentence. Try saying out loud and ask yourself, “Would I actually say that to someone.” Most of…[Read more]

  • Enchanter stones and boost spells turned me off. Dialogue lacks tact too. Its too explanatory and doesnt do anything for the characters. Premise is very unclear. Sentance structure needs a lot of work also.

  • Mohamed Shafiek posted an update in the group Group logo of The Everlasting.The Everlasting. 3 weeks ago

    Am I the only one who finds it ironic that the people on Amazon giving it a bad review are the only ones who have verified purchases? 🙂

    • Yes, the Everlasting has bad bad reviews on Amazon. Hope the author will improve in the future and will create a masterpiece.

      • It would have to be another series. Everlasting has a lazy premise by itself. It’s also really cliched. There’s nothing wrong with cliches as long as the execution is perfect. In the Everlasting, that’s not the case. The series onward would carry a lot of the same as the first volume so, in the future, it needs to be a fresh new series for him to…[Read more]

    • There’s reason to believe that the poor verified reviews on Amazon may come from those who received the book for free as part of an earlier giveaway. It counts as a verified purchase since I had to buy the books for the giveaway. Twitter accounts of many entrants show that most of their tweets consist of them entering as many Amazon giveaways as…[Read more]

    • At least it received a review. Unlike mine, only @thaddeus gave an effort of writing one T_T

  • Mohamed Shafiek posted an update 3 weeks ago

    Overloaded
    Story and Art by Mohamed Shafiek

    Chicago, Chicago.

    William Bastion trench crawls out of an overturned car. Shattered glass and rubble surround him. His clothing is torn up and blood trickles down over his left eye, forcing him to close it and squint with the other. His face is bruised and splotched with smeared blood.

    It’s one o…[Read more]

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