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  • Ice Fairy posted an update 3 weeks, 6 days ago

    @shojiamasawa I like this genre 👍👍👌

  • Ice Fairy posted an update 3 weeks, 6 days ago

    @shojiamasawa I bet you’ve laughed several times while writing this novel. 😂😂

  • Ice Fairy posted an update 4 weeks ago

    @shojiamasawa Hi Shoji, haha 👼, neko girl….😯😣, I want to read it but somehow I can’t login again to read it, could you post it somewhere else, or please send me a download link.

  • Mohamed Shafiek posted an update 4 weeks ago

    @shojiamasawa Hi, Shoji. The name’s Ryan. I’m the one who wrote “Square One.” In any case. I wanted to give you my thoughts and insights about the plot. I am an avid critique and tend to nail problems as well as recommend things. I have seen and judged a lot of works, so let’s see how yours holds up.

    Right off the bat, the title strikes me wrong.…[Read more]

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    • Thank you for the feedback! If you can (I think I set it up so this is possible), you can download the entire manuscript. Regardless, I’m grateful you took the time to present your thoughts on my work. It actually helped me to gather my own thoughts as well.

      The main title was something I came up with a long time ago; The inclusion of “human” and…[Read more]

      • Okay, so that explains the title. I would say the title would isn’t bad, just a mouthful, that’s all. As for the references, again, I would stress that a lot of people may not get them. I say this because there was a manga I read a long time ago that was dropped because the writer would bring up these random references that nobody got. Later I did…[Read more]

        • I’ve never heard of that manga, but it’s a good cautionary tale, regardless. The story should, of course, come first. References are often alienating to the audience, especially if the author has obscure tastes. Looking through my manuscript, it looks like the only noticeable references are to Captain Scarlet and The Dark Knight; the former using…[Read more]

  • Javon Sankoh posted an update 1 month ago

    @shojiamasawa Hey, thanks for the friend request 😉 By the way, your light novel does sound interesting I can imagine myself enjoying the interactions between Kaji Fujiwara and Chie Kurasuma. I’m sure there’s a meaningful reason as to why he dislikes her cat appearance. Still, I have a question. Is Chie actually a cat or is she wearing a tail?

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    • Thank you for the feedback, my friend. As an answer to your question, it’s a fake tale, probably attached to a belt or simply clipped to her skirt. I suppose I should make that clearer in the narrative, so I’m glad you brought it to my attention!

      • You’re welcome, man. So, when do you think you’ll finish your revisions for your first chapter? I’d love to read it and give you my opinion on it

        • Thank you for the interest, fellas! The chapter has been revised and posted, literally 10 seconds ago! Reading through, it was mentioned that the tail was fake, but it was pretty easy to miss. Also, I’m pretty sure your member privileges will allow you to download the entire volume–all five chapters–in manuscript and book format.…[Read more]

      • Where can I take a look at this story of yours?

  • Shoji Amasawa replied to the topic Plot (spoilers) in the forum Group logo of StoriesStories 4 months, 3 weeks ago

    Hi, all. New member, longtime writer, hoping to be a recognised author. I recently finished the first volume of a potential light novel series. Currently, it is undergoing editing and revisions. In the meantime, I’d like to give a general premise to see what people think.

    (She was a) Human Cat-Girl!
    Kaji Fujiwara is an insufferable, arrogant, and…[Read more]

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