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    • #421451
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      Anonymous
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      Rank: New member – Mukyū

      I’ve finished my light novel, the Shadow Girls. Would anyone be willing to read it for me and suggest feedback, positive comments as well as improvements?

    • #421493
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      Ayumi Megumi
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      @Jyukai AMV Jyukai Ituna
      Rank: 6th Kyū – Rokkyū

      We would gladly give feedback on your novel. That’s what we do here as fellow members. It’s good news that you finished one volume already! Well, right now we can’t read it since the file is apparently to large to upload.

      Have you tried to upload it to the “Stories section”? We can either leave comments there or discuss it on this forum.

    • #421500

      Chloe Walker
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      Oh that’s great news! I’ll try and submit it on stories. Thanks so much!

    • #421575
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      Robert E. Parkin
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      Rank: 8th Kyū – Hakkyū

      New here, and would love to be a beta reader. However you wish to let me read it would be fine. Just let me know.

      • #421651

        Chloe Walker
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        Great! Let me know your email, and I’ll send it to you.

        • #421664
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          Robert E. Parkin
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          @CorsonExsul
          Rank: 8th Kyū – Hakkyū

          Not too sure how the PMs work here, but I’ll just post it here anyway. Be easier for anyone to send me their work that way.

          robertparkin1046@gmail.com

          Allow me some time since I’m a slow reader. ^^;

    • #422126
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      I’ve uploaded chapter 1 onto stories. Happy holidays!

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